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Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting little story with a twist at the end that was not expected. It made me almost hold my breath in anticipation of what was going to be inside the barn.
In all, I feel that it told the story of a young child that spends most of her time alone and was now doomed to spend eternity alone.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought that it was well writen and did not expect the twist at the end. I am sure there are many other short stories out there that would catch a reader's eye. I thought that some of the short sentences could have been rolled into longer sentences for ease of reading.
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