Your description of the cold and snow drew me into the story. Fearful at first then wonder were the emotions I felt for the person in the cabin. What tragedy of the past had come to knock on the door? Combining both the current story and the girl's story were done beautifully. Great work.
The title of your piece got my attention and then I started to read it and was drawn in. It was very descriptive and had me spell bound for what was going to come next. The kind of story telling talent you have is apparent in your work. Thank you for sharing. Nice work.
This short story touched me. I was moved by the way in which it was told. All the thoughts of doubt and worry and what others would think of your teaching abilities were pushed away with the bigger story. It is a reminder of the importance of never under estimating anyone. Thank you for sharing your story.
I started to read this and was drawn in. I had to keep going to find out what was going to happen. The description of the Abena was intriguing.
I thought the picture you painted of this place was also very vivid. You have a true talent for writing. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you for sharing.
Powerful symbolism. Powerful because it is true. Anyone who reads this and denies seeing some of this in themselves is not being honest.
Thank you for your message. It is one that will stick with me for a long time.
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