Wow... This one moved me... You should turn this into a something of a Novel piece, seriously! You managed to pinpoint so many important aspects of everyday life in such a short composition... and your description of what was going inside Dan... wonderful.
You created a truly short marvel of a short story!
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/gecko
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.09 seconds at 3:42am on Nov 24, 2024 via server WEBX2.