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Review by Gary Mega Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
This was certainly interesting, it has a good idea, you mention how you coped with the breakups with poetry, and how you learned how to deal with your sadness, I like how you even mentioned the person that inspired you to take this solution and show it to the rest of us!
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Review by Gary Mega Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This story is quite interesting, talking about the message of a fortune cookie and its messages, I can see where your coming from, you get a fortune cookie, open it up, and read something that you barely understand, it just gets frustrating at times, its a nice story and I hope to see more!
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Review by Gary Mega Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Its definitely an interesting poem, the problem I have here is I have no idea what you're talking about and don't know what to take from it, the things I take from it are that the woman is pregnant with a child and had a miscarriage, and the man is unhappy with it, so nice work, just wish I knew what you were talking about.
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Review by Gary Mega Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
It's an interesting concept, I can really feel the pain from this poem of the break up, the rhythm flows nicely and connects with each verse.
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