I am relatively new to the site and my opinion may not be worth more than a grain of salt, but I found lines that were truly poetic and sensual. However, I personally got lost by an "overuse" of language (My word) and the extremely long sentences. I liked what I think you were trying to say but I found myself having to decipher the piece, making it hard to read and understand. Peace always, Garrick
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