Gabriel S. New's (gabrielsnew) Reviews

This was a blast of flavor in the eyes, my friend. The introductory paragraph is weak and cliched, but the rest of it is strong and original. Please keep writing.

Happy Holidays,
Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628153

Review of Emptiness

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Bang! Short and Sweet! Look forward to reading more from you.

Happy Holidays,
Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628149

Review of Will and Thought

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

I like this and I like the expression, however I want to bring it to your attention that the term "will" may not actually fit your intended purpose.

Happy Holidays,
Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628133

Review of A thaw in winter

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Bang! I love it. It reminds me of William Carlos Williams. Please keep writing.
Happy Holidays,

Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628132

Review of Beauty: A response.

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I like the feeling or the expression, it's not worth my time to pry the two apart and that's a trait of good emotional writing. I hesitate to inflate your ego further, but I look forward to reading more from you.
Happy Holidays,

Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628126

Review of How is it done?

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Reminds me of my own experience, and that's the most powerful tool a piece of writing can have.

Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628125

Review of The author that never was.

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Doesn't quite come full circle but I love the imagery and subject matter.
Happy Holidays

Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628109

Review of The Child

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Portentous. (And I don't mean Pretentious! :)
Please keep writing.
Happy holidays.

Gabriel S. New
$ilky $mooth $tories
www.gabrielsnew.tk

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#2628098

Review of The Spiral Society: Chapter One

Review by Gabriel S. New

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

I didn't have time to read this whole thing, but I dig the intro, it reads kind of like Ursula K. LeGuin or J.K. Rowling except a little more amateur. Work on polishing your style and gripping the reader with an open hand, perhaps by using fewer and stronger/more peculiar descriptive words.
And above all, keep writing my friend.

Gabriel S. New
www.gabrielsnew.tk