This is a great poem, very well executed,prose and purpose intact.I have enjoyed reading it and at this point I don't see how it could be improved.Please continue in making a good work of writing.
well< i would love to leave 250 char... except all I can say is very well done! (l was left out in 2nd to last line but we wont be picky.)with that not said, keep up the great work, and maybe try something even more on the lighter side. I believe in the current format you could extend this train of thought much further......poetic novella
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