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Rated: E | (4.5)
"I am the villian in the story" is clearly written. The heart you show towards your friend is emotionally moving. You realise the two sides to yourself and respect her despite your tormented feelings for her:) This was a well written story.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Faites battle is an excellent piece of literature to read, although with the many mistakes it takes the reader away from the story. You should continue the story, because it is entertaining. Just keep in mind to reread what you have written. It often helps catch many mistakes that you have. I hope that you continue to write. :)
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