I think that this story is really good. The idea of turning the shrimp of the family into a reality controlling goddess is excellent, and the content is pretty good as well. My only issue with it is that it doesn't have very many chapters yet, but that really isn't the author's fault, so I didn't let it influence my rating. I give this story a 4.5/5, and I hope that people will help add to it in the future.
I think that this story is quite good. The theme of a tiny and un-intimidating little pixie turning into a towering terror of a giantess is very creative. I really like the content in this story, and hope that it continues to gain more great adds from many writers.
I feel that this story is absolutely fantastic. Not only does it have a great and original theme, but the material in it is impressive as well. It is also one of the longest interactives I have ever seen, so it has plenty of routes for plenty of different people to choose plenty of different ways to read it. I give this amazing story, John's Fantastic Voyages, a 5/5!
This story is absolutely fantastic! I must say that the number of different story lines is a great part of its appeal... The basis behind it is one of the most creative that I have ever seen, and the story itself certainly does live up to the amazing theme behind it. I praise this story as one of my favorites, and encourage anyone else who reads this to add to it. Rather your interests are in monsters, giants/giantesses, or a story about the struggles of an oddball trying to fit in with society, this story doesn't disappoint! It will deliver you your expectations and then some!
"The Outcast" is an amazing interactive, and I rate it a 5/5!
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