Wow! What a beautiful poem you have written here for your wonderful wife. Each verse shows how special she is to you and your love and respect shines through this lovely poem!. Cherish each other and hold each other in deep love and great esteem. A great job here!
Hello {user: buckleytom64} This is funnyface. I just finished reading "The Fun House" and am so pleased I took the time to read it.
From the opening sentence to the very end it had grabbed my attention and held it throughout. You have done a wonderful job creating and developing the children involved personalities.,I recall when I was a teen and this story is so believable and brings back memories. . A wonderful opening, the body of the story is well developed This is simply a great write. I hope you have it published..
Hello aralls this is Funnyface and I just read "My First Memory1945" that you composed and that you are willing to share with us. I truly enjoyed reading your item, I myself do not remember much about the war but I can learn as much as possible by reading.
My heart filled with sorrow when I read that Roy had received a Dear John letter. I have heard that a lot of people received them, how their hearts must have been filled with sorrow. I will look forward to reading more of your items. Enjoy Writing,Com and drop by my site whenever you would like. Thanks Funnyface
Hello mARi☠StressedAtWork this is Funnyface. I just read the song you wrote for you special friend. I really can't picture ever writing music or lyrics, but I think you did a great job writing the lyrics here.. I hope everything goes well wih you and your special friend. From funnyface
This poem touches my heart. I lived in many foster homes, after the death of my Mom who died when I was young, buried on my sixth birthday. I know how hurtful words can be and I try with all my will never to offend or hurt anyone, yet I know I often fail. Way to often words spoken hurts us deeply and too often we don't even realize how deep the wound goes and how we too often cause people to be offended or hurt by the words we say! Funnyface
Hello { user:jimbob43} this is Funnyface dropping in to let you know I read, "To Whom Shall We Go". I really enjoyed the inspiration you inspired your readers with. I pray that I will never forget the lessons implanted in your
religious writings. I'd like to use this to write notes in my study Bible. With your permission of course. Have a great day/ evening. Funnyface
Hello, this poetic story touches my heart. I never had a quilt and I always wanted one. Tomorrow I will turn71 and I was finally gifted a quilt that I longed years for. It doesn't hold any stories but it my son who bought it for me, spent alot of time hunting for and choosing this gift. It is on my bed and will be there until, either I or the quilt wears out. Thank you for sharring this story with us.
Hello, You have done a nice job writing this story. I found it sad to read that his Mother was drunk, how hard it must be for children to see.their Mother drunk. What a hard little life he had especially with his Dads suicide.I hope he meets up with Jessalyn so he can have a true friend. I enjoy this reading!
Hello {brokensmile_07 this is Funnyface. This must be the most beautiful heartfelt Eulogy that I have ever read. What a wonderful loving grandmother you had or have.I only hope one of my children will be able to say the same about me when I am gone. Tears are filling my eyes.Great love, and emotions expressed here. Thank you so much.
Love is so easy to fall into,and it can be so wonderful just like something one treasures. I hope you have fallen in love with some one that will treasure you , Lots of happiness, spend time together and treasure your friendship or love.I have been married for over fifty years, however my daughter was married 33 years when she found out her hubby was unfaithful, she received her divorce a week and half ago, she is brokenhearted.
Hello user:myst520} this ia Funnyface dropping by to tell you how my heart was touched by the poem you penned titled"Daddy Don"t".
There are so many children who has to suffer abuse at the hands of one or another of their parents, and that just should never happened. I appreciate you writing on the subject. I hope this is not happening to you or that it has not happened to you, If it has I am so sorry,. It is not your fault. This poem touches my heart.
Hello {user:cmfh @writing.com} this is Funnyface I want to say I really enjoyed this sweet poem named "Little Girl". My little girls have all grown up and so are my grand daughters , however they will always be my special Little Girls" Time flies while one's children are growing. I miss mine and the time I had with them.
Good evening Yellow Rose this is Funnyface. I was granted a few minutes of sunshine while taking a short journey through your portfolio. Your words are a delight to read and are heart touching. Forgotten is a poem that touches my heart. I am a senior and in poor health, some days I say I would like to move on, but most days I thank God for allowing me the time to spend with my family and friends. Your words touch my heart. God bless you. FUNNYFACE
Good evening Ladyoz this is Funnyface dropping by your port to say hello and let you know how much I enjoyed the story you wrote entitled "Outback Honeymoon" I must say I am not much of an author, but this tale appealed to me. WHEN i was a child I lived in the forest and I can put myself right in the middle of your story. I truly like your tale and congratulate you for still being together after your difficult beginning! Great work!
Good evening Megan E. this is Funnyface, and I would like to welcome you to Writing.com.
I read your poem "the Battle" This is an excellent choice for the title.
I am so sorry to read that you and your Mom's boyfriend don't get along , how hard this must be for both you and your Mom. I am so sorry that your Dad is having a hard time giving up drinking. My Dad drank quite a lot when my Mom died and we 4 children were placed in foster care.so I do understand what you are going through. Hugs of comfort! Funnyface
Good evening unclarry this is Funnyface. I just read your short story about "A Mothers Love.. I really liked this story and I could relate to it as when I was 5/6 I lost my Mom. Before she faced death she was so concerned for her five young children, and just as the Mother flew arounind to find her young, I can recall my Mother calling to my two older siblings to help her find her young ones.We were out hiding so we wouldn';t need to go inside and see our Mom die.. My Mom died when i was nearly 6 leaving three hoy/s ages 14, 12, and 4 and two girls my sister who was just a small baby and myself who was nearly 6 , My Mom was buried on my 6th birthday, We were very lonely and we didn't see much of the family. My only friends were the birds,and bees . I am pleased my older brothers taught about the birds and bees in the trees...We were no longer lonely! The Mother showed deep courage when she went hunting for her babes!Your story is truly about a Mothers love!
Hello tinaraccoon this is Funnyface saying hello. The poem you wrote titled "A Single Teardrop" touches my heart, and brought tears to my eyes. Death is so final. I lost my mama before I started school, later I lost my youngest brother from Colin cancer and I lost my eldest brother about five years ago, he was filled with cancer and he had is arm removed an much more. God took him in His loving kindness, My brother no longer suffers. I pray your Mother didn[t suffer much pain~
Hello ItsAlwaysTheQuietOnes, this is Funnyface, I just read your poem "Frozen I Stand Frozen I Lay" and my heart started beating so strongly. I just cannot picture any one pointing a gun at anyone. How horrible you must have felt and how scared you would be. I hope you never encounter another situation like this again!.
.Another Friday is a heart touching poem! There are so many who pretend that life is full of love and joy but that is seldom the case. How hard it must be for a family to have their hopes and dreams crushed. What wonderful descriptive writing you used here as you showed through your words.the way many people need to live. I don't know how they survive, especially young ones. . I really like your writing!
Hello Deborah Palmer this is Funnyface is happy to be back I just read your story of "Life With Depression."
Some of the things that you went through probably was the cause of your depression. I am so sorry that you had to face all this in such a short time. I was really surprised and my heart reached out to you at the death of your Dad. It read as if you didn't realize that he was dying. . My Mom passed away when I was still five, she died of TB. and we were waiting for it to occur, but it made us all very sad when it happened. There is a void in a person that happens when one of our love ones pass on. Losing your Dad was one thing but then for you to cope with moving, having your cousin and aunt move in with you and watch your Mom moving on with her life and dating . I am sure that put a lot of stress on you!. I can not tell what will help or cure your depression, but if you ever want to talk I am here, Hugs of comfort!
Funnyface
Stick and stones can and way to often do hurt us. Words is so often more painful than we would believe. I am so sorry you had to go through the pain that inspired you to write the poem "Sticks and Stones. I try every day not to hurt a person, yet I know I fail miserably. Nice expression on a subject we all can relate to , and your fonts males this poem standout. I hope you are enjoying Writing.com. Funnyface
Good Morning Winnie Kay this is Funnyface dropping in to say hello! I just read your true story that tells us of the ordeal that your Mama had to go through.
I can relate to what you had to go through while your Mother was suffering thee trials she went through. I am forever losing every thing. I bet in a day I loose my billfold at least five or six times a day. I am wondering if it is beginning to happen to me!
I like the kindnessand love you showed to your Mother. There but for the grace o fGod it can be any one of us.. Thank you for writing this heartfelt true story!
What a wonderful tribute written about your Australian Cattle Dog . I think my dog is such a great animal, she is loyal, loving and very kind. For the last two years she has had to share her home with two other adults another dog and two cats, but I don;t think she would know how to herd cattle. I am sure your dog is so loving because you love her first. I found this article inspiring, informative, and heart touching. Thank you for sharing the tale of Shelia!, and I am pleased to read about another dog {YOURS } that is loving as my Jenna...She is going on11 years old!
What wonderful pictures our Heavenly Father gave you . How excited you must have been when the Lord told you to look up above and you were gifted with the vision of many of your friends. Tell me is there ever a time you could feel closer to our Creator than viewing this vision!
Hello Piau this is Funnyface dropping in to let you know how much I enjoyed your poem "I Would Like To Tell You A Story"
I had a smile on my face throughout the whole read and once or twice I laughed out loud. Keep writing , and remember the more you read others writing the more your work will be read. Enjoy your self on this site. It rocks.
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