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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
samile, I'm new to serious writing and trying to learn the ropes. I found it easy to empathize with your main character, Winters, which is a must for a successful, serious piece on anyone caught in a war zone. The present-tense usage (He wakes, he spots, etc.) was different, but that's not meant as a criticism. Over all, I found your story interesting and very well done. Thank you for allowing me read this.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute and rymthem was good. Very instructive in these days of diet for this and that, and our fat our American children have become. Good Job
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