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Review of ADVICE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem, standard rhyme scheme, but it became slightly tedious half way through to be honest. Your poetry needs a kick that will set it apart from all the rest, something to grab the reader's eye; maybe try a different rhyme scheme, or rearrange your word structure.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting poem, yet I can't fathom why you chose to space the words as you did. Also, you misspelled speechless, unless it was a deliberate symbol? I'm not much of a poetry fan, but good job nonetheless.
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