that was really good. i had the same family my mom died and i dont live with my dad and i know how the boy trevor feels and he has courage to stand up to his dad and that is a great charatizic to have even if it just a character in a story that is what makes someone themself and not others. keep up the good work on the writing. if writiing make you feel happy then keep writing dont let poeple bring you done so keep up the awesome job. and have a wounderful day.
i believe it could be a little bit better but good job on the plot and things. i really related to it. you made me believe i was there which is a really good thing. i love storys that makes me feel like i am there or that person it was really cool. keep up the awesome job.
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