M.E. Enyu,
I liked this poem but there were some spelling errors in the first part I don't know if that is on porpose or by mistake just wanted to bring that to your attention. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Crazy-
I told you I'd look at your stuff. I'm glad I did this is very good. I like how you used the differnt types of flowers my favorite part though would have to be the the part about the birds surfing on the fields of wheat.
Kimberly Diane
Crazy-
I love it! Some of it threww me just trying to connect the things but then again it is late my time so it may just be my brain is shuting down. It is very good though!
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