Even though there's only one plot thread at the time of writing (2/3/2018) and it's only being written by you, I'm thoroughly engaged in both it and your writing style, and would love to see them both continue. Ethan is a very interesting character due to his complicated past leading to his present character who's attempting to make a new life for himself, and I really wanna see how his new life plays out!
I'm impressed that I found an Interactive that managed to make me care about more than just one plotline.
It's a shame that redhurricane and the12thdoctor are no longer members of the site and as such can't add chapters, but the rest of you have been doing just as good in your plotlines, if not more.
My only wish is for Wade to be a bit more of a sympathetic protagonist, as it can be a bit hard to sympathize with someone who's a dick to everyone all the time. At this point, though, something like this would have to be caused by circumstances within story routes, as he's been well established as a dickhead since day one.
(particularly interested in: Wade as "David Xanatos" accompanying and subsequently saving Fate, Destiny and Wade's body-sharing trainwreck, and Destiny falling for gargoyle-Wade)
(Also jeez that's a crap-ton of Gargoyles references. If only I had a grasp of the show as comprehensive as some of the authors here, I'd possibly be able to write chapters up to the standard of most of the others.)
I'm impressed that I found an Interactive that managed to make me care about more than just one plotline.
It's a shame that redhurricane and the12thdoctor are no longer members of the site and as such can't add chapters, but the rest of you have been doing just as good in your plotlines, if not more.
(particularly interested in: Wade as "David Xanatos" accompanying and subsequently saving Fate, Destiny and Wade's body-sharing trainwreck, and Destiny falling for gargoyle-Wade)
(Also jeez that's a crap-ton of Gargoyles references. If only I had a grasp of the show as comprehensive as some of the authors here, I'd possibly be able to write chapters up to the standard of most of the others.)
I'm impressed that I found an Interactive that managed to make me care about more than just one plotline.
It's a shame that redhurricane and the12thdoctor are no longer members of the site and as such can't add chapters, but the rest of you have been doing just as good in your plotlines, if not more.
(particularly interested in: Wade as "David Xanatos" accompanying and subsequently saving Fate, and Destiny and Wade's body-sharing trainwreck)
(Also jeez that's a crap-ton of Gargoyles references. If only I had a grasp of the show as comprehensive as some of the authors here, I'd possibly be able to write chapters up to the standard of most of the others.)
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