I believe that this story has turned out great. I like all of the unique and interesting choices that are in this story. It also had an amazing creative idea, which I found to be very interesting. Spelling, grammar, and punctuation were almost perfect in the chapters that I read.
I really have enjoyed this story. I like the idea/story, it is pretty creative. There were some typos, and some grammar issues, but overall this story is turning out to be pretty good. So far this is one of the best interactive stories that I have found on Writing.com.
To be honest, this story is going downhill. I've noticed a TON of spelling errors, capitalization errors, punctuation errors, and improper grammer everywhere; there are probably hundreds of errors scattered throughout this entire story. Although, this story has some great potential. I think that if you watched those skills that I listed this could become a great story.
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