Hello,
I liked this poem because it is real about mental illness. I've struggled with it and this sums up so much of it. I did have some trouble reading it. At times, I had to stop and start with the lyricism but that could be my own problem. Maybe you meant it that way to show the way mental illness makes someone think? I appreciate the vocabulary and word choice (which was just awesome), the form, and the rhyme. This was just a great poem.
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