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Review by Fireant Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ok this is hysterical but *shudder* couldn't the ending be nicer?

*shudder*

Ok, the review-This is a simply wonderful story. The intro got my attention so I clicked on it and loved it.
I loved the dialogue between all four characters.
It's a good read and the only change I recommend is there is an erroneous carriage return in Satrana's dialogue.

Good fun read!
Cindy
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Milkman
This is a lovely poem. It made me think of how sad I felt when my husband and I were on opposite ends of the world.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Daizy
I think this is a wonderful prayer and something that everyone, christian or not, could aspire to.

Thank you so much for sharing this.
Cindy
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Review by Fireant Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh this is lovely. Rich imagery, a dreadful sense of mystery and suspense, and of being alone.


You know, you cna simply close your eyes and see all of this play out. I could taste your regret~
This is a wonderful poem!
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Review by Fireant Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OMG this is hysterical!!!
I hope you'll continue, it's even better than the National Lampoon's parody.
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Review by Fireant Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wonderfully well written. I felt like I was fortunate to sit perched on your shoulder throughout your painful learning process.

Thank you for the caution of the real vice the imagined. I am sure that this possibility is not stressed enough to those in search of true love on line.
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