So, first off, call me! and...your TV is mine now.
Well, this is a wonderful story. Its chilling and eerie and yet strangely delicate in the way you narate the story.
Its very well crafted, but somewhat confusing. I had to reread some parts and ended up interprating it in a way I'm not so sure was your intention, but being the reader I could do that.
I've come to realize through reading this one of the differences between us and that is I buiold images like the artist I am, and you story tell. You carry the story above the words and that sets us apart.
Now email me our story so we can compose it together, think of it...it could be INVINCIBLE!
Summing it up, call me please and email me soon.
email- Vilorphia@gmail.com
Please write to me soon!
Davey B
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