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Review of FNAF new story  Open in new Window.
Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hy ! Great idea here! Beofre reading your story I was a complete stranger to Five Nights at Freddy's! But now the only thing I want to do is to play the 5 games on Steam :D
Realy thank you for giving us the opportunity to know this wonderfull horror game ;)

I have 2 story too, maybe you could ad some horror chapters in it? :)
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Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good interactive story here :)

The interactive is pretty addictive!The number of chapter allows to read during hours, I like it!

The only thing I have to say is about the characters names. I think they are way too similar, during the story I asked myself multiple times "Wait who is who??!! Is it Ember, Amber, Ellee??!.."

I know you can't change that now but i think t'es à good remark.

Anyway, keep writing, it's very good 😊
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Review of Rainbow Drops  Open in new Window.
Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very great choice of interactive story :)

The idea of wishing drops is good, because everything is possible in the story depending on the preferences of every reader and writer!

Everyone can add his own story in the main story and create a world where everyting is possible 👌

Keep adding stories like this one! It's very great!
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Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Their is a lot of body swap interactives involving a technological machine, but I have to say I love your interpretation!

I think that tour interactive chapters are more exiting ans diversified than the other interactive on this webside :)

I am just a bit sad that the arc with Michelle Anderson swapping with te girlfriend is not longer,it's my favorite :)

Anyway, keep writing 👍👌
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Review of The Witch Sister  Open in new Window.
Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Only 5 stars because I can't give more 😊

I realy like your interactive story idea ;)
Granting the sister with magical powers to tortures her brother is great 😊

About the chapters, I think that you could make them a bit longer. This way it the immersion in the story would be better :)

But, very great work :)
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Review of FNAF new story  Open in new Window.
Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The idea of the interactive story is pretty good. It allows to the player of this game to take place, in a way, to the game by letting his imagination wandering.

But in my opinion, I think that the different chapters should be longer and more suspens should be added 😊

Anyway, great job 😊
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Review of Dust To Dust  Open in new Window.
Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hey! It's just to say thank you for this interactive story :)

The idea with the dust that anyone can have to take over someone is just great :)

The multiple choices you added are granting us unlimited stories ideas!

It would be very cool if you could continue the story on a regular basis 😊👌
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Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hey, it's just a little message to thank you about your story!

I must say I love the idea ! It's realy changing me from all of the other interactives i am reading :)

It's the only one intercative based on this kind of story on writing.com and i am glad you wrote it 👌

Have a nice day :)
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Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You guy are a top writer! This story is very great! I think you should do more of them and even longer ones 😊

Maybe you could make an interactive story with this idea??!!

I am sure it will have a lot of readers on this website! And with all of the great writer i see every days, it could become awesome 😊
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Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very great story, good idea but I think it deserve To have way more chapters in it! It's not a Miranda L story but with a writer as good as her a story like this one could be very very good with more chapters, it would be cool going further in the exiting plot lines 😊

Keep doing Miranda you'r great!
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Review by fgh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think this is the best story on writing.com! And in my opinion, i think it would be even better if it continue on the girlfriend and/or Cherie part of the story :)

So keep doing dood work :)
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