This is a terrific beginning to your story. You have included emotion and mystery and whetted my appetite for more. The writing flows smoothly and is easy to read. And, you make me curious to know what this girl will do with the money and the stone. I have put you on my list of favorites and hope to read more of this soon. Keep writing and be happy. Katsy
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