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Review by saucy jacky Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That piece of work was...well, a piece of work! it's rare to find such a good, flawless piece of poetry on Writing.com these days, you've described that you, not necessarily you, are in love with a woman and have been obsessed with her since you were a teen, i like how you used "nutter" which is slang we use in England (unless you live in England i'm not sure how you knew about that) all in all your good, real good :)


Yours sincerely Far-east-ghost, Saucy Jacky
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Review by saucy jacky Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+
OH MY GOD! OoO THIS story took me around 5 hours to read!? and the grammar and punctuation and the smart words not even i could understand this story is AMAZING! you are AMAZING! and also i liked the part with the Ghana bananas, i never had them are they nice? ^^ and another thing i LOVED the part about the banana plantation explaining thingy with the facts and the techniques i love that sort of stuff and i have got to say......this is ONE LONG STORY! keep up the good work! ^^
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