I wasn't sure what to make of this at first as I couldn't find the rhythm easily. Then it clicked. It flowed and so almost did the tears. Its a beautiful, yet honest and hard hitting piece of work. It should be used as the talk over of an safety campaign to help young people understand the dangers. I was very moved and for a piece of writing to do that shows its power. Amazing - thank you
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