Just to start off-I think that the title of your piece is what really reeled me into considering to read it. Then, when I read the description, it sealed the deal. Now for the critiquing-this was really enjoyable to read for a few reasons: 1. The style is really great and professional. 2. You fall in love with the characters immediately because they are well developed and just the kind you like. 3. Your scenes are painted wonderfully. Those are the three things I look for in a piece, and you had them all exquisitley done and balanced. Congratulations and well-done! Thank you.
-Emily
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