I found this to be a very insightful look into one of the biggest misconceptions in the world, the meaning of freedom. The grim idea that freedom is more than just a bill of rights, rather its a twisted web of ugly things that we tend to over look in our world. I really liked how the "young lad" from the beginning follows the crowd and looks on at this spectacle in awe, but in his old age he comes to realize that all the bright lights that dazzled his eyes 50 years became or always were fires of destruction. Then at the end, when "we prepare to face the unknown" ide like to think that what you meant there is that freedom is unknown to us all... 4.5 stars, i look forward to reading more of your portfolio!
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