Very interesting.
I felt drawn in from the word go. Very unique visuals and it all happens so fast. I had to re-read it to be sure.
Odd name for the main character, but it reminded me of the old Kung Fu show....Master Po?
The descrioptions made me want to know more.
It was just enough for me to want to know who are the others he speaks of.
Why did he kill himself?
What will happen as he hardens his resolve?
Great job!
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