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Rated: E | (3.5)
That was a pretty cute story idea. A reformed villain trying to keep on the path. I like the low key vibe to it all, even a world with super beings is mostly normal in the day to day after all. Our main characters powers are a bit nebulous, but I'm guessing some kind of projection of empathy or something... His anger turns into destruction while he can make silence by playing a song about 'Sound of Silence'... Definitely seems like something you'd need to keep a tight hold on.

It's a bit light on detail, mostly just back and forth dialog. It's enough at at least set the scenes but does make it all feel a bit empty. Technically speaking the choice of only Bolding a few words just came off as awkward to read. I couldn't see a really rhyme or reason to it all. Chiefly 'singer', really not sure why that one is in bold, the others I can at least make a guess on.

Overall though I enjoyed well enough and the ending is cute.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Overall enjoyable read, Always appreciate a slowly shrinking concept(so many shrinking stories on this site are 'poof they are now an inch tall!'). Execution-wise nearly all threads keep on topic and transition smoothly from one to another. The concept remains consistent throughout, the casual nature of the teasing never coming off too forced or getting cruel with it. It would be nice if more authors had continued it on to showing Joe having to interact with his bigger world and the day to day adjustments...

I know this is an older interactive and likely won't get much new added to it (a continuation from me isn't coming easily to my mind atm) but for what is here I enjoyed my time with it.
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