Wow. Just... wow. This is so great! With most WWII stories (At least all the ones that I've read) you've got the Holocaust in the center of it all. But this is just the story of a normal girl who went along with the flow and lived through a whole war. You should definitely expand on it, as the diary form and the time period it covers just don't really match up. I have a feeling it would make an excellent book! Good job, and I really hope you consider expanding it! :)
First of all, wow! This was just indescribable. Seriously, I'm at a loss for words here, and usually I can think of something to say...
I find myself having to read this over and over again. Each time I read it I find something else, something that I hadn't seen before. Not only that, I have no suggestions for improvement (But then, I've never been much of one for editing, unless it's my own work). Overall, this is probably my favorite piece of writing that I've seen on this site thus far. It has just made my day.
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