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Review of Gray House  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think that you did an amazing job of developing this story line and making it something that was very easy to read. I think that you are very good at character development and that you worked details into the writing very well. I enjoyed reading this piece.
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Review of Conflict  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This was very well written...however I find myself feeling a little cheated that she only agreed that she loved him and that she would marry him after she was already drunk...otherwise, great story...I know how hard it can be to develop a great story in 869 words, but I think that you have done a great job here already of doing so.

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