Interesting story with lot's of potential but I am afraid that you lost me because it was too "wordy" I would suggest that it is a simple topic that could have been more comical of it was expressed in more simpler terms.
Keep writing, WE all need to practice daily. At least you are actioning more than I lately. I have to get over my fear of releasing my work. Good luck.
My name is Brian ( enough2011). I was very touched by your therapeutic message. I hope most of all that it helped you in writing about your horrific youth. People like your father are really sick and we cannot change people like them. All we can do is change ourselves by either standing up to them which is hard to do or leaving them which is also difficult but so often the only option to take.
I am in the process of writing a book, mostly about my life but it will be a novel for many reasons. The title is enough is enough, to figure.
Best of luck, you have my sincerest respect for your courage.
Brian
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