Can I just say, "Awwwwwww." I really enjoyed this one. The rhyming was wonderful and the expression of an unknown and unappreciated love was one that really touches the heart. I thought it was lovely to not only read, but to be able feel the narrators pain as if I too was in the same situation. :)
I can say I really enjoyed it. When first seeing the title, I was unsure of what I was getting myself into but then I read it and wow. I love that it is complicated in it's words, but if read right it is easily understandable. I am a big fan of the rhyming as well, as rhyming is my favourite thing to do. I'm very much like Dr.Seuss that way and if him and I were on in the same I would say that you did a fantastic job! If you feel inclined to do so, please check out some of my works (there arent very many). Once again, great job!
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