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Review of Sonnet I  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Memphis, I had to write to let you know how much I loved Sonnet I. The rhyme scheme and meter are well formed and the subject matter developed throughout. Thank you for sharing your work with all of us here at writing.com, I hope you will continue to allow us to revel in your talent.
Tam
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Having been a daddy's girl myself and losing him to cancer 6 years ago, your prose "Broken Girl Recovering: Four Years Later" tugged hard at my heart strings. I can't imagine how much harder it would be to lose ones father/parent at such a tender time of life. Sounds like Cody may have been lead to you in order to save your life. You are obviously very talented and have so much to offer this ailing world. I hope you wil continue to share your work with us here at writing.com, I look forward to reading more.
By the way, my Cody's name is Warren. :)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
After reading Am I who, the man there in the moon, I was inspired to send you a note proclaiming my vision of your great talent. Swan Vince, this piece evokes strong emotions in me, and took me back to a time of my life when I was young, confused and, I felt, invisible. That was long ago yet I have never forgotten that anguish. I am hoping you have written this from memories and are not still suffering with this affliction.
I was wondering at your choice of wording in the next to last line, (i.e. wondering), did you mean to say wandering?

Thank you for sharing your work with us here at writing.com. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Happy writing, :)

Tam
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