I stumbled onto your piece by pure accident and I have to be honest, I love it. The content, the way you set it out, I just want to compliment you on all of it. Thank-you for making my day that little bit brighter. Please than, write more like this. I really do enjoy them.
I'm not good with poems either, so bare with me a little. This review probably won't be a run-of-the-mill type, but hey I like it, so I'm gonna review it. The reason why I like it is because I like sleeping, a lot. I guess when a piece of writing hits home, you like it a lot more then another piece that might be about dogs...or something else...Dreaming, I like that too...so you've hit two birds with one stone so to speak. I think it's brilliant, and who cares if you can't write poems, I think it still works. What is important is the emotion and the way you express this in your writing. Also writing about what people like is another way to make it great. Overall, I really liked it. Hit deep it did. :P
Keep up the good work, keep on writing and never give up!
First off I will let you know that I don't know anything about poems...but when I stumbled upon yours I couldn't help but review. It's lovely and I didn't seem to find any faults. It's sweet and almost sad at the same time. I really liked the second stanza, which is well written out as I see it and so painfully true in some cases. Overall I enjoyed this poem a lot.
Keep up the good work, keep on writing and never give up!
Great stuff. :P But I'd like to see more pens and pencils. I was planning to send someone on WDC a nice journal with a pen of some sorts, like a fountian pen, but there wasn't any... Just thought I'd make a suggestion.
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