The last part five lines...made me smile. It is well written and I love how you express your self here. Reading through, it gives off good advice and makes you ponder the rest. Love is great but real true friendship is rarer.
I've read over chapter 3 about four times. Each time I read it I was drawn further and further into the plotline. I love the direction in how your having the kingdom going. The way the advisors of the round table fear the king. I look forward to future chapters to find out more about Borelis and the princess. The union or non depending on how the story goes. I can't wait to see how it pans out. please keep up the great writing.
I am mind blown by the first chapter. Juliet's story has drawn me in and is leaving me wondering what is next. Trix and Juliet friendship sounds incredible but also it makes me wonder if she is hiding something from Juliet. So their returning to earth, what has become of earth. So many questions.
Wow. That is emotionally charged. I can feel the anxiety and stress rolling off the page in waves. I like how certain words rhyme with one another. I empathize with the cheating boyfriend. In so many ways I am able to relate to your poem.
My favorite line from the entire poem is the fifth stanza "there's not enough time, oh my am I stressed." I can relate to that line. I think that's my daily mantra. It was a powerful but awesome read. Thank you for writing.
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