Today I finished the book "Pride and Prejudice" so my mind was already on the track of prejudice and how it conflicts with our relationships and human nature. I really enjoyed this since your style is much different than that of the book, and you were able to bring this timeless human flaw to attention in this era. I love your style and the casual way your words flow into a rhythm. No verses seem forced or misplaced as I so often see in similar writing. The only thing I'd say to change would be the constant use of the word 'you'. I seem to lose focus a bit when I come across that word and the redundancy pulls form the message. I love this piece though! Great work!
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