I am new to writing.com and I stumbled upon this piece this morning while I explored this site.
One thing I noticed in regards to your poem is the simplicity and delicacy it produces.
"flight" being in the title, "to dance amongst the blossoms" and the comparison to a Hummingbird are all wonderfully intertwined ideas of flying, lightheartedness and it reminds me of the attitude of fairies or wisps...thanks for the great read!
Ella
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