I really enjoyed this piece. The psycology is sound and reasoned, and one can almost feel sympathy for the boy with his kind of history. The only thing that really bothered me with this particular story was that it seemed too light at times for the dark outcome. Such things as when the aunt shouted son of a witch as opposed to it's more vulgar counterpart. But overall very interesting, thanks for sharing!
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