This didn't really produce the imagery in my mind at all. It didn't make me feel anything or connected to this story. It personified winter in a couple of lines but others it broke the spell of personification. I started out thinking it was describing winter as we view it solely how it is right on the nose, but then it personified it. I think that's why I couldn't connect. It didn't stay to the theme of the title or some of the lines.
I really liked the start of it, excellent hook! I started to loose interest in it within the 2nd and 3rd paragraph. I think it was because there were so many descriptive words almost too many that it actually took me out of the reality and the story I was trying to figure out what you could mean. Less descriptive filler words and paint the picture simpler so I can still stay within the story and imagine it without having to stop and take in all the words thrown at me.
All of it has really great rhythm and beat until the 2nd to last paragraph. It didn't quite flow rhythmically with the rest of it when I read it. It broke the spell it put over me and took me to critiquing it instead of enjoying it. Other than that I really liked it! :)
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