Although I was saddened by the lyrics, I really enjoyed reading this. Each verse flows smoothly into the next. My favorite part is the chorus. I feel it adds depth and character. Depending on the type of music, I could see myself singing along in the car.
This story was very charming. I like how you put your own spin on a classic tale. The story flowed nicely, like the river Thames. The imagery was clear and helped me to see it as it played out. This piece had great characters, a funny plot and a terrific ending!
I was drawn in by the first paragraph. The suspense guided me from one paragraph to the next, wanting to see just what was causing this man fear. The use of colorful descriptions helped me to see what was going on in and around the main character.
I wanted to know more, though. Will there be another chapter? Or is this the end for the lone, maddened man?
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