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Review of A Hot Bath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I read"A Hot Bath" Open in new Window.and wanted to offer you this review:


Emotional Impact:This is a warm and comforting type poem. A warm bath is usually warm and comforting.This soaked into my senses.


Effectiveness of Form:I liked the way the poet used all the senses to make you feel the bath. From the warm soothing soapy water to the dirty ring left on the tub like left behind memories.


Punctuation and Grammar:As for grammar and punctuation. I didn't notice that anything was lacking.


*Star* Closing Comments:In closing I think this was a great poem. Well written and flowing smoothly. Congradulations! I think this is wonderful!

~Elaine~
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Review of O is for Psycho  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wonderfull story. Yes, definitely finish this. I loved it. I got into the story as soon as I began to read and it kept my attention wonderfully all the way through the story. Great work and keep On Writing!! I am enclosing some GPS for you
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