I don't know much about rating poetry but there's some deep undertones here. I like writing that sparks my intuition and not just my imagination. Great work.
This could fit anyone from a recent surviver of a natural disasterl, to someone fighting an addiction. Well written. I like the use of description and how fluidly it can apply to multiple points of view.
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