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Review by E Simony
Rated: E | (3.5)
I quite like this piece! C=

It is simple, and utilises repetition effectively, which is great.

At each line, I found myself wanting to know what might come next.

Despite what some people might say, I think this is quite a deep piece.
It conveys a certain sense of intellectuality that you should be proud of !

I look forward to reading more of your work!

Take care of yourself!
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Review by E Simony
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Whoa! Great article. I really liked it.

The psychology of it is intriguing, to say the least.

Thanks for posting, and keep it up!

Take care.
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Review of Incarceration  
Review by E Simony
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow! I absolutely love this piece.

It is interesting and engrossing at every moment, and like many good pieces it left me wanting more.

Your writing style is magnificent, and your feel for the characters created an incredible flow to the text, that further draws in its reader.

You seem very smart. It is a great piece of writing! Really!
Be proud, mate.


Take care.
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Review of Black Dog  
Review by E Simony
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I think this is rather brilliant.

Despite the topic, it is not depressing itself. And it has a pleasant and appropriate well-flowing rhythm to it, which seems to come rather naturally to you.

Some people, I suppose, fear to speak of some... perhaps 'touchy' topics. But I think you have done this piece very well, in a very honest manner. And in a strange way, that seems to make it less "oh my god". Which I think is good, honestly.

I am keeping an eye out for your work! Keep it up!

Take care.
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Review of The Crunch Point  
Review by E Simony
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Whoa! To be completely honest I really, really like this piece. I found myself interested at ever moment.

Your writing style/technique is simply brilliant and suits this type of writing well, I think.
I love your descriptiveness, and that... while you are talking about some simple things at times, you make it sound so... engrossing and ... Oh, perhaps I am not using the right words.
But I really do like this!! I will be looking out for more of your work.

Keep it up.
Take care.
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