I'd never heard of storygaming before and your article did a very good job explaining it. At first I thought it was the same as a campfire or an interactive story, but after reading through I realize that it is different. Seems like a lot of work for the writer, but I can see how if you get a good group together it could be fun.
The imagery in this poem is really captivating. I like how your word choice is different than what I would expect, but says the same things in a smoother way. It makes me want to go back and reread to really enjoy the words. I also enjoy how pretty it is, (I'm a visual person) and the picture with the tulips and the text seem to belong together. I don't read a lot of poems because it's hard for me to form opinions on them, but this one I really like.
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