purly beautiful! I cant say anything else...i feeel for you and hope you feel better about this soon... May god bless you in times of need and give you the strength to move on in this life as he intends us all to do!
P.S.
i'll pray for you and your sister tonight along with all the people you know, sound good?
This is my first review so here it goes! i thought your story so far is very good. short in a sense but its all you in there, giving this all you have! that is the type of person who is more than likely one with a beautiful mind. (no pun on the movie intended) your story can be expanded to show more depth but overall it is good. I feel for you and wish you the best of luck! My brother has had i think its 18 surgeries in which most were brain surgeries and galblatter removal. good luck again...
a fellow person and a fellow writer,
eclectic mind
P.S. god loves everyone, its people and satine that do bad things to you, i just hope you remember that...
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