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Rated: E | (5.0)
HAhaaa '' I pity the fool'' aw cool, the A Team was a huge part of my life, I loved watching it. I love the bit at the end where Jason asks if the dog can have a piece. I enjoyed reading this as it was heartwarming , and not too long. I found it interesting and relatable too. I liked how it was spaced out as it was easy to read looking at it on my screen. Keep writing, I'm wondering what ither stories you have now?

lovely story, Im glad he enjoyed his birthday.
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