I love it!! I have a game called Mola Mola and it's literally about feeding the thing till it either dies from what it's eating or dies from some crazy form of death >¤< but it truely is a funny fish. Thank you for writing this!
Simply beautiful. I love pottery myself and instantly can relate to this. It captures the beauty of the fire of someone's discovery of self and satisfaction. Thank you.
Wow! Dark but to the point! I enjoyed the twist in the end. Life's a heinous field of craziness. I very much enjoyed this.
The layout made it easy to read and the dialogue was easy to understand. Thank you
I love this. I can totally empathise with everything written here. Congratulations on breaking free! I hope to read more from you and I wish you well on your journey to further freedom.
I enjoyed the language used in this story and descriptive context was great. The ending left me a little disappointed but overall was a fun short story. Thanks!
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