This engages me from the start. Makes me keep reading, looking for a the next thing. The Christmas theme, unexpected at the beginning, holds it all together. The way you treat "adopted" at the end leaves a lot unsaid and unknowable. I like that.
I really like this story. You develop it well. The characters are believable and so is the plot in the world in which we now live. The surprise ending is a big surprise but also believable. You make me want to have copy of that book.
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