This streams emotion through every word, and I enjoyed it. I won't be a stickler on grammar or anything but just tell you, you have a good gift at knowing what it takes for writing- writing with emotion. Please continue to write- this is great! :D Best of all, it has no pattern but your own, which is great as well since so many writers today stick to a certain rule or critique on writing.
It's very powerful and emotional, but most of all it comes from the heart which is what makes it so good. Thank you for posting this! Please continue to write!
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