This is a good beginning and interesting concept. I like this character, he sounds like he's a bit of a card. At first it's not clear if he's dead or alive or undead or like the youth of today just doesn't identify as alive or dead or perhaps unalive?
One suggestion to improve readability is to break it up into paragraphs.
I like the tension and pace of this story. The romance is subtle and delicate with the emotions being left for the reader to decipher. Their connection grown from their time together. Then the twist! The shocking lies, betrayal! Yet more questions are left unanswered somewhere the story must go on.
A nice introduction. It will be interesting to see how the chess theme develops. Is that tiny red speck important, what is her recipe for potato soup, the intrigue is only beginning!
On a constructive note, I suggest breaking the paragraphs up, into smaller easier to digest blocks.
An open heart warming family tail. The action begins even before we meet our protagonists. The welcoming embrace of family to a returning member of the herd. Strong emotions are abound wrapped up in a painful history.
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