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Review of Memories Unmade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Memories Unmade is a flowing, visual piece from the talented author, L.A.Powell.

the concept is wonderful and creative.

the words lift from the page as if a subtle breeze takes them after they are read.

the visuals in the poem are very strong to me. i can SEE this taking place. the near misses the way the memories return, time after time.

the "what if's" in life are confounding aren't they? this shows me that i spend too much time in the "what is" and need to allow my mind to wander to places less confined.

a well written piece from a talent with a future. thank you for sharing.

warmly,
dpatrick
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Review of I WALK ALONE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
sherri,

how touching and heartfelt. i share these feelings and i know many others who have suffered a tragic loss do to. yor work is inspirational and moving. i'm still learning. learning from writers like you. thanks you and i'm sorry.
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